You have enough money to purchase either house or business which you choose to buy
When you want a buy something you have need of money. In today’s life money is everything, you have an enough money that time you can buy everything that you want. Everyone tries to multiply his money and for that many people are invest their money in shear market or in business. I think when I have an enough money then I can buy business. In following essay I will explain why I can purchase business.
Business is the activity to produce or manufacture product for sealing. It's directly means that product produce for making money. When anyone invest money in business and do it proper way that business is always successful and from that you can earn money. Business is active investment. You can earn money when you invest in business but purchasing house is dead investment, you cannot make profit or earn money when you invest in-house. You can also buy house when you are a successful business person because you can make a lot money from your successful business.
Do you have your own business or you are employee of any company? Think about it you can realize you are work for someone else and the payback of your work is your salary. The owner of company make hundreds time profit that he was paying you for your work. Employee has less freedom but owner has no any restrictions. Employee didn’t secure about his job and salary but owner has no any tension about security of job and his income because his income is more secure. You invested correctly then your income is secure and it makes always profit for you.
From business you can earn more revenue, it always increase your saving and make you rich and rich. When you are a business person, you are your own boss. Whatever decision taken for your business you can take it very easily but in employment ship you cannot take decision without company owner. In employment ship it is needed to report your boss but in business it don’t need because you are your own boss.
In a nutshell, although some people are prefer to buy home for enjoy their vacations. I strongly prefer to buy a business, which will allow to enjoy my freedom and increase my savings. It also help me to buy other things that I want, its include house, car etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When you want a buy something, you have ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... explain why I can purchase business. Business is the activity to produce or m...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...uce or manufacture product for sealing. Its directly means that product produce for...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'invests'.
Suggestion: invests
...t produce for making money. When anyone invest money in business and do it proper way ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... money from your successful business. Do you have your own business or you are...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...Employee has less freedom but owner has no any restrictions. Employee didn't ...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... about his job and salary but owner has no any tension about security of job and h...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'makes'.
Suggestion: always makes
...ectly then your income is secure and it makes always profit for you. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and it makes always profit for you. From business you can earn more revenue,...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...ss you can earn more revenue, it always increase your saving and make you rich and rich....
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t need because you are your own boss. In a nutshell, although some people are ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...In a nutshell, although some people are prefer to buy home for enjoy their vacations. ...
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Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enjoying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enjoying
...fer to buy a business, which will allow to enjoy my freedom and increase my savings. It ...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...reedom and increase my savings. It also help me to buy other things that I want, its...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...that I want, its include house, car etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6120906801 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34926320756 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410579345088 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0769042872 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2916666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5416666667 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.45110844103 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461018736665 0.236089414692 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159780266973 0.076458572812 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127023619289 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261862677183 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12333081023 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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