Some people like doing work by hand. others prefer using machines. which do you prefer
In modern age of the world everyone try to work simple and efficient ways. Now a day various machines are manufactured to do work simple and efficient, the machines are very capable to do work by a significant way and working as per operator guided. Machine make man’s work easy, also improve accuracy and continuity in work, I think now a day most of the people prefer work using machines. In following essay I am explaining some advantages of working using machine.
First, machine is an instrument that makes human work or other work easy. By using machine human reduce his effort and increase productivity of the product. In earlier age human farming farm by hand or by using animals, for that it required humans more effort as well as animal’s effort. In that type of farming there are not consistency and less productivity are gain to the farmer. In present date many of farmers are do his work by machine means by tractor. It makes his work so easy and improve the productivity and make more profit to the farmer. The cost of machine is one of the major factor in human’s life. Some farmer are poor, they cannot afford tractor for farming. But they can farming using others tractor.
Secondly, machine do repetitive work very easily and increase accuracy of product. In industries various machines are used that work on pneumatic and electric power. We all know that in industry there are repeating work and required accuracy in work for maintaining quality of product. When repetitive work do by hand, it is very boring and fatigue full, and hence it is difficult to maintain the accuracy of product. The effect of this is reduce the quality of product. Machine can easily maintain that accuracy and improve the quality of product. Machine also do work in limited time, but machine has required its maintenance. It is always lower than the overall cost, that mean machine always increase the profit of industry.
Hence, I always prefer machine to do any work, it save my time and increase productivity. It also increase accuracy of product and help for to maintain quality of product, as well as it has no fatigue problem to do work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80697050938 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59566720331 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447721179625 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3917860977 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9565217391 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266236706942 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865147363409 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694194123735 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190193972073 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655933674671 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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