Without a shadow of a doubt, friendships are of the essence, especially when it comes to having a peaceful lifestyle. An unanswered question in this area is whether we should continue our relationship with an old friend who does something not being according to our desire. Despite arguments asserting that we never taste our old mutually respectful relationships again, and we must end our relationship as soon as possible, I believe otherwise, maintaining that keeping old friendships must prioritize our preferences. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
The first exquisite point corroborating my stance on this subject is that given the
time-consuming nature of establishing new friendships which will become long-term, we should maintain our old friendship alive. Old friends are familiar with our difficulties and sorrows, and this process has taken many years. In retrospect, we can remember unpleasant and difficult situations having been overcome by assistance or consultation of these friends. New friends would not be able to suggest practical solutions which are compatible with our circumstances. Furthermore, due to having prolonged interactions, we have developed some common interests and amusements that someone else will not like. Therefore, it is worthful to keep our long-term friendships.
Another reason to be mentioned is that we should learn to accept different attitudes and standpoints due to existing differences between individuals. Psychologically speaking, each event and experience affects our personality and beliefs, which make each person unique. Thanks to the advancement of technology and the modern era’s complexity, individuals are influenced by multiplicity viewpoints and attitudes, and the growth of these differences is boosted. Therefore, we must understand that we cannot find people always behaving based on our desires. On the other hand, our old friends are more likely to meet our expectations because they intentionally avoid trivial frictions and issues. For instance, although Hossein, my closest and oldest friend, is not punctual, he always arrives on time for our meetings.
Reflecting upon all the reasons mentioned above, someone realizes that old friends are our invaluable assets, and we should not destroy our long-lasting relationships.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71590909091 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24983609727 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3302376988 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.352941176 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151259591372 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554042597431 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500362698096 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863903556854 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583529663088 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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