Young people enjoy life better than older people do.
I agree with the idea that young people enjoy their lifes more than older people do. When people are younger, life shows them a great number of opportunities to enjoy. As they get older, they have some special situations that do not encourage them to do somethings. As an example, some old people have cardiac diseases that make some actions impossible. When people are younger, they can enjoy their lifes better doing adventure trips, living in a different city or country, or practicing radical sports.
One good reason that young people enjoy life better than older is related to their possibilities to do an adventure trip. While they are under 20’s or 30’s, it is easier to discover new places to go and just do it with a backpack with them. We know about some young adults who visit an entire continent as Europe, traveling by train and staying in cheaper places than good hotels. During their adventures, they work as waiters, house cleaners, or dish washers. Making money with not qualified jobs, they can travel to the next country. After one or two years, they come back home with a huge experience. I believe that is very unusual to see an old person doing the same kind of trip, since they prefer to have confortable places to stay and good restaurants to eat.
As a second reason why younger people enjoy life better than older, I think that after you are stabilished in your country it is difficult to move. Young people do not have their roots stronger in a place than old people. Most of old people have business or their families around them. Additionally, the adventure spirit that young people have encourage them to move for a different city or country just to live this kind of experience.
My final reason to support that young people enjoy life better than older, mentions the possibility for a younger person to practice radical sports. Maybe not everybody agrees that radical sports is a good way to enjoy life. But for me, the chance to have the sensation of adrenalin flowing in my veins is really good. Absolutely is more natural and we can see more younger people doing this kind of activities. However, nowadays we are seeing lots of older people doing down hill with their bikes, surfing, and diving.
To conclude, I agree with the idea that young people enjoy life better than older people because when they are younger, life gives them more possibilities. Nevertheless, we are observing older people with a young behavior and they are enjoying their lifes better than we can imagine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77397260274 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40948935599 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458904109589 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1475214907 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9130434783 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.574854895615 0.236089414692 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207918277761 0.076458572812 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189589215584 0.0737576698707 257% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.428158861681 0.150856017488 284% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122589002441 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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