Young People enjoy life more than old people. Do you agree or not?
Many people define life in different ways and it depends on all types of things like age, sex, ethnics and others. Out of these factors, if we consider the only factor age, then obviously young people enjoy their life far better that the old people. I believe, the main reason the young people enjoy their life is old people are limited by their increasing reponsibility and decreasing energy with the growing age.
Lets start with how the increasing reponsibility for the old ones decrease their enjoyment of life. For old people, they have to consider different aspects that affects them like job and family. They have to fulfill cetain expectations from job of doing work perfectly as well as they have to perform some family function to take care of young and the old ones. With in these circle of responsibility they are lost and can only think of outer things rather than of themselves. They start avoiding their dreams and start proritize the work and the family. Always compromising for the dreams and the things, they are unable to taste the real feel of life. For example, consider a family of a single mother who have a young child of age 19. In that family the mother have to be everything for the child, she has to be everyperson -a mother, a father, a sister, a friend. And, putting all those masks and pretending to be everything she will eventually loose the inner herself. However, for the young one with mother as her rock bottom has more freedom to explore the lifr. So, which should we consider as a enjoyment of life-- losing the innerself or exploring in freedom?
After the incresing responsibilty, then comes the decreasing energy and activeness with increase in age. As people start to cross above 30, they start to lose their energy as well as their activeness. Eventually, with all the stress in job and family they start to have anxiety and other health problems. Eventually, with increasing problems rather than a happy person they will turn into a worrier. Young person have extra energy and excitement since they are experiencing things for the first time. But, old people has passed the phase already, they have seen everything in their life time due to which they didinot find any excitement in those aspects. For instance, if we see the way the people these days celebrate festivals. Young people are mostly excited about festivals with kites, colurs and lights, while old people cant find beauty in those things. So, the enjoyment of life is all subjective even though young people have high energy and excitement to enjoy life more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81531531532 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45949555298 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484234234234 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7218171251 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9565217391 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284526348614 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876635965166 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085558900818 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225179269194 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054588947988 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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