Young people enjoy life more than older people
Happiness in life is very much important. We can show happiness by how we enjoy our life. But does enjoyment has any hard and fixed rule? What you called enjoyment? I think, it varies on person to person. Some people might think, going to party at night, hanging with friend, travelling and so on is enjoyment especially to young one. There are lots of things in young life which called enjoyment. But for the older people, everything is their children and their family and they enjoy on their enjoyment. Therefore, personally i believe, people enjoy life when they are young.
To begin with, young age is the period where we learn different things. Their will be many things which we will experience for the first time in life. In young,everything we will go on enjoying it as we are getting it for the first time. For instance, buying a new bike and going for the ride with friends. It gives us feeling that we are enjoying our life but to the older people, it will not make feel same. It's because they had already done this things or due to the age they are no more interested.
Secondly, enjoyment is their when there is excitement, craze and enthusiasm. Young age is the highly energetic age. Though during young age, there will be high responsiblity and many work to do, even they manage their time to enjoy. For instance, during weekend young prefer to travel to many places, taste the beauty and different food items of the place, beside their hectic schedule on other days. But for the older people, every day will be same, no job and no work and no plan for weekends to enjoy their boring life.
Finally, Young period is that period, where people are strong and healthy to enjoy their life by any short of means but to the old, choices are limited . For instance, during young age, people are avid to do many things: trekking to the mountain trails, paragliding, Benji jumping and so on. These impart lots of happiness to people. But to do this things in old age is highly impossible, due to their age and age associated disease. Older people cannot even walk for 20 min in high hills, heart attack problem might occur during Benji jumping and like this.
In conclusion, due to craze , proper health condition and first experience during young period, makes younger people to enjoy their life than the older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66828087167 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33671088037 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489104116223 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1149974168 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8846153846 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42307692308 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358902030658 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104629016709 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950614766145 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238694562018 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100852277854 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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