young people enjoy life more than older people do .
I agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than old people in some way.
I feel this way for a few reasons, the first reason is curiosity, the enthusiasm to try new things and go to new places. For example, when I tell my kids who are 14 and 16 years old that we are travelling to a new country in the summer, they would be so excited about it since the day I told them till the day we get back from there. They would keep searching about perfect spots for adventures and sightseeing, they would check the area around where we stay for cool restaurants to try new food. Personally, as an adult I prefer to travel with my kids for their positive vibes and that makes me get the best out of the trip.
Also, being young means you have more energy to continue a whole day having fun without feeling exhausted so that means they enjoy the day to its maximum. For example, when I was 18 years old and just graduated out of high school, my friends and I decided we would spend a month travelling, hanging out and attending concerts. So, I would go on a road trip that takes 3 hours and return home at the end of the day and then wake up to take another road trip to another city just to attend a concert and try a new restaurant then go back home as well. I didn’t feel exhausted or that I needed to rest in between to recharge my energy. I just wanted to enjoy everyday to its fullest.
On the other hand, I recently appreciate staying at home in peace reading a book or watching TV because I don’t feel the urge to try many things I’ve already done back then when I was younger, Also I’d rather save my energy and time to work harder and read more articles related to my job. In conclusion, older people enjoy life but in less energetic and enthusiastic way than young people who are so open to try and do new stuff they haven’t done before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...laces. For example, when I tell my kids who are 14 and 16 years old that we are travell...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...harge my energy. I just wanted to enjoy everyday to its fullest. On the other hand, I ...
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Line 4, column 410, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ay than young people who are so open to try and do new stuff they haven’t done before. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21169916435 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26461196364 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540389972145 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0616694632 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211900013595 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992096974436 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184013637534 0.0737576698707 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222079194204 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216207360815 0.0645574589148 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 58.1214874552 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.73 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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