Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree?
I strongly believe that young people enjoy life more than older one. The reasons to support this idea are mainly three.
The first and second reason are that young people have much more free time and energy than older one. Older people have their life full of commitments. They generally have a full-time work that takes approximately 8 hours per day for 5 or 6 days a week. They usually have a family so they have to take care of their children every day. They have to do all the households stuff and they need to balance all these commitments and maybe find some spare time for themselves. So, when they arrive at the weekend, all their energy has already been drained and they don't want to do anything than just sit on the sofa and watch some TV. An example of this lifestyle is given be my uncle Carl with his wife and his children. They don't have time do anything than just working during the week and when they have time to something different, for example going to a museum, visiting a city they prefer doing a couch-potato lifestyle. The most exciting thing they do, once in a while, is going to the cinema.
The third reason is that young people are more keen to try new experiences. Generally they have a more open mind, they want to know different cultures and lifestyle, they want to explore different cities; not just the most famous capitals in the world like Paris, London or Berlin.
For example I really would like to visit the wild forests of Amazon, I love to kayak in a river or climb a mountain. So, my vacations are always unpredictable. On the other side, my parents do every year the same vacation. They choose a hot location along the sea and they go there just to relax, sunbath and swimming into the sea.
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- Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree? 60
- Some young adults want independence as soon as possible.Other young adults prrefer living with their parents for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better. Use specific pionts and examples to support your opinion. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rl with his wife and his children. They dont have time do anything than just working...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, so, third, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46855345912 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30274797445 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1441031828 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5882352941 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220529941381 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924917399212 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121935592684 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160537249899 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108527179284 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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