Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
The word "enjoy" can have ambiguous meanings. Some enjoy their life by getting their work done, or on the other hand, some might enjoy by traveling to new places. Every person has his definition for it. Though personal, I still believe that young people enjoy life better. I feel this way for 2 reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, younger people do not have much responsibility when compared to the older generation. For instance, older people have to take care of their much older parents, their own family, have to earn money, pay bills and the list goes on. These responsibilities limit them to enjoy their life. Even when they do try to enjoy by going out they have to put their children choices first i.e, where to travel, where to eat which movies to watch, etc. All of these things make their life less enjoyable. On the contrary, the younger generation doesn't have to worry about these responsibilities, they can fully enjoy the benefits their parents work so hard to get. They can travel to different places without worrying about where the money will come, they can relax on a sunny day without any tension of how they will pay the next mortgage. This show that younger people can carefree enjoy life more.
Furthermore, young people have more energy which plays a vital role in enjoying life. Even if they have some responsibilities they are still left with enough energy to go out and enjoy after work, which older people cannot do. My own experience is a compelling example of this. 5 years ago, when I was still in school and doing part-time for 3 hours after school, I still had enough energy left after my shift to go out with friends and enjoy, whereas, my dad who worked a 9 to 5 job would come back tired, will have his dinner and sleep. Thus, making his like very monotonous. The above example shows how younger people can enjoy their life more.
In conclusion, there is a huge difference between young and older people to enjoy their life. Of course, older people can also enjoy their life according to their new age. However, at some point, that age starts to get in the way, which makes it difficult to enjoy their life to the fullest. Whereas, younger people are not bounded by anything and can do anything they want.
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, thus, whereas, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, of course, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65024630542 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42401074581 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.4884720443 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0869565217 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.652173913 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312529872317 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118106615158 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101001971013 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229333259424 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577945076017 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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