Your city council wants to attract more tourists. Which of the following would be the best new tourist attraction?
A history museum.
A shopping mall.
An indoor amusement park.
Some people state that building a history museum would be the best option to the city because they believe that by doing it, it would attract many tourists to the city and it would benefit from that. However, others think otherwise. They agree that either an indoor amusement park or a shopping mall would be the best option to the city because, certainly, many people would be coming to visit the city. In my opinion, building a history museum and an indoor amusement park would attract many tourists to the city. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, as my city wants to swell in numbers, by developing an indoor amusement park is one of the option because there are many of it constructed in another city nearby mine. For example, those tourists who are used to going to that city will notice that with the amusement park located in my city, they will migrate to mine sheer because the amusement park in my city will be much larger than what those people are used to. Besides, it is going to be a great opportunity for employment because there are merely a few options of employment right now and this would favor my city with upcoming park. Therefore, this elucidates the desideratum of constructing the park in my city.
Moreover, developing a museum in my city would be the second best option because nowadays there are many historians who have been graduated and do not have a special place to work in. For instance, throughout the year there are people finishing colleges and university and, unfortunately, are getting unemployee and having museums spread all around the city would be an excellent idea. Thus, this another instance illustrates the necessity of pursuing museums.
Furthermore, having amusement parks would be the greatest advantages to my city because they would attract many Europeans. As another example of it, one of my friends is from Italy and enjoys spending time in the amusement parks but in Italy there are no such parks there. Besides, he has many of other friends who also enjoy come to my city. Thus, this last example clarifies the need of having amusement parks.
Finally, I strongly agree that building amusement parks and museums would benefit the city a lot because there would be many tourists coming to it and many activities to do in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73267326733 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47796880115 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430693069307 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6102831483 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7647058824 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350786587851 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129451523205 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120208309088 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222227152496 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106223526654 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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