Your friend has decided to switch careers, but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.
people’s lives are full of uncertainty since they are constantly confronting different types of dilemmas during their lifetime, so they start seeking advice from others, especially close ones. When individuals consult others about their specific choice, they should be careful because it may heavily influence their situation. I would like to tell my companion to choose a new profession after taking a look at his ability and possible earning of his future career. I will explain why these aspects are significant in career preference in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the amount of payment of workers is an essential portion of every job since people need money to satisfy certain demands of their life. Nowadays, important parts of life including a house, vehicle, and food are depended on the currency. Therefore, people must have a satisfactory extent of income to purchase these matters. For instance, most of my friends are willing to stop pursuing their current position because the ramification they receive monthly is insufficient for them. they cannot afford private automobiles and accommodations due to their not enough salary. if they start coursing a different job which offers more payment, they will probably have a better life. To sum up, I will consult others to choose an occupation that pays sufficient cash; otherwise, they will end up not being able to purchase basic stuffs.
Secondly, individuals should weigh their ability and experience before accepting a fresh position to be available to be promoted. being promoted is a critically important aspect of work. However, workers will not be elevated if they attempt to endeavor things at which they are not good. For this reason, people, especially young adults have to favor occupation under their skill in order not to prevent themselves from upgrading their position while working at a certain organization. To illustrate thoroughly, three years ago, my buddy who was a satisfactory mathematician changed his pursuit to an economist by seeking an opportunity to become a supervisor of a company. Unfortunately, he is still struggling to carry out tasks at his job, which limits him to stay as an economist but not a leader of an institution.
In summation, I think that people need to take a look at their ability and their probable salary before deciding the alteration of their career. this is because they should have a fine amount of money to fulfill the needs of life, and they must not limit themselves for only
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1564792176 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8445412713 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574572127139 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3234718541 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.056527125864 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181163712326 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208593454414 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387069473185 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128564621437 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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