To become daughter or son of parents is one of the greatest gift given by god. Children are reflection of their parents. Parents put their all efforts in up bring of children. They want some important qualities in their son or daughter. the important qualities are morality, honesty, respect for elders, obedience, care.
I think these are the most important qualities that a son or daughter have. these all qualities never remained same over the time. In Indian culture honesty, obedience, care, respect all are the basic qualities which are consider as basic key concepts of parenting. now a days the youth population of India wants to adopt other cultural styles to adjust with new demands of modernization. In tough of war of Indian culture and other cultures the qualities of good son or daughter is changing with situations.
The second reason for changes in important qualities of good son or daughter is the influence of social media. Ass I read in a book negative information influenced more rapidly than positive information. Social media give each type of information on different modes and people more eagerly accept negative information than positive ones. As the television shows give the negative aspects of good qualities than youth accept it more easily.
so we can say that the qualities of good son or daughter will never be remained same. As in older days the parents decisions are the last decisions and children have to be obey them but now the children find their own decisions and go with them. As the circumstances change the qualities of good son or daughter also change to get happiness or to get success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ant qualities in their son or daughter. the important qualities are morality, hones...
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... respect for elders, obedience, care. I think these are the most important qua...
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...ge to get happiness or to get success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 276.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68891358148 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510869565217 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9887523485 49.2860985944 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06452816374 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352313594175 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130973744121 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118774596133 0.0662205650399 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20651866588 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846981050878 0.0443174109184 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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