color influence
The article and lecture are about color influence on purchaser`s behavior. While the author state how color shows an impact on employee`s performance, the speaker gives the research result conducted about how different the beige and orange color cause customer`s desire to buy.
Accordingly, the passage mainly discusses a color combination of people`s surrounding as the main interest of interior designers in these days. For example, yellow walls are suitable for a trading room because of its power to enhance someone`s mood which makes investment efficient. To add, the lecturer notes that most of the restaurant`s hall is tended to be painted in red and orange color. Thus, it shows how people used to believe these colors feature to stimulate consumer`s appetite.
Next, the author indicates health consequences that are associated with different colors. For instance, a red color considered as the factor of high blood pressure, however, blue is seen as the heartbeat and blood pressure slower. Also, that is the reason why all the hospital sections are painted in neutral colors rather than intense ones. As the lecturer states, interior designers used to believe kind of red colors improves someone`s desire to eat, however, the research coordinated on two fast food restaurants where walls are painted in different, one is in beige while another is in red, possessed different results. Moreover, there was no significant difference in income and food variations, picked up by consumers, between the restaurants.
- A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay 70
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 76
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 83
- Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
- how music affect consumer`s behavior 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52916666667 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1793605227 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5654855271 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266457441901 0.272083759551 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104395010562 0.0996497079465 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10100040863 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184663560269 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793823578812 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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