Computerized voting versus traditional

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t more than thousands of votes compared to few errors made by humans, furthermore,...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, talking about, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1373.03311258 134% => OK
No of words: 358.0 270.72406181 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12290502793 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83453359364 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.289189946 49.2860985944 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.833333333 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236970346546 0.272083759551 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108463435982 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150306531209 0.0662205650399 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147456046634 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105648838145 0.0443174109184 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.