Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Voting determines the future of a country and the direction it will be moving towards to. I firmly believe that everyone including childer over 15 should contribute the their country's future and I summerize my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
First, so that children can process and understand, responsibilities such as voting should be tought to the children from early ages. Therefore, they will be having the opportunity to experience the nature of national responsibility by voting when they are above 15 year old. Furthermore, voting will help them realize that they also have significant influence on their country's future.
Additionally, by voting in early ages children get familiar with the process. For instance, they will learn about all the candidates and their perspectives, and consequently how to analyze what they are offering. Children will understand how to choose their voting candidate. As an example, they get familiar with the language of politics and how to read or watch different contents related to election, in addition, they can join their candidate of choice campaign and learn how to support them respectfully and rationally. The more they go through this process the more educated they will be about their country's political aspects.
Lastly, children this age mostly want to act and be like adults, hence, with voting they will be experiencing adulthood. As a result, they get a good comprehension about how maturity looks like and also it will be fun for them.
All in all, I believe we should take children and their impact on our country's future seriously. Accordingly, we need to give children in this age range a chance to be a part of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...uding childer over 15 should contribute the their countrys future and I summerize my reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 277.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11913357401 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90272912708 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9390231469 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212237926706 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948933285603 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671166953024 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137156059008 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259808734692 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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