Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of a doubt, parents can help their children to make them have better decisions in their challenging dilemmas. While the role of parents was much more critcial in many dacades ago, nowadays, it is somehow different. In my opinion, youngsters are less likely eager and interested in taking advice or help from their fathers and mothers. I believe in this way for many reasons that I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is the fact that all of the children now go to school and get educated. This was not an ordinary thing in old times. To put it in other words, although, only a few kids were able to attend educative classes in the past, now, it is an indisputable reality that all of the kids easily have access to schools. Going to schools and attending classes, they have more knowledge and wisdom to decide on their own while facing struggling situations. As a result, they are barely depended to the assistance of their parents. I can assert that education can impactfully enable young people to see the benefits and drawbacks of their options as well as to predic their possible subsequent contingencies.
Secondly, in this information century, there are huge number of online courses and teaching materials that can be reached by everyone. On one hand, children and young adults can watch videos about their issues at anytime that they need. On the other hand, they can also discuss their problems with many online tutors and friends who are readily passionate to give help. Take my own compelling example. Last year, I was thinking about choosing one job among many occupations as my secondary job. To find the best way of evaluating my options, I share my issue on an online networking platform. This led me to have some helpful and useful discussions with my friends on those applications. Since I got noticed about smany crucial elements in choosing a part-time job, I was able to filter my options to select the best one. Therefore, my example demostrated that I was not in the need of my parents' help.
Furthermore, the development of the notions like self-confidence and the spread of those kind of things have caused young children to basically try to be more independent from their families.
Taking the reasons and examples above, I agree that young people are more inclined to do or behave in a way they desire on themselves. They like to not be dependent to their parents. With this respect, they even prefer to do the wrong thing but the thing that is their own decision, not their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...st and foremost reason is the fact that all of the children now go to school and get educa...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...now, it is an indisputable reality that all of the kids easily have access to schools. Goi...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
... like self-confidence and the spread of those kind of things have caused young children to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 22.412803532 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 30.3222958057 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1373.03311258 155% => OK
No of words: 446.0 270.72406181 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7869955157 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65732528437 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 145.348785872 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526905829596 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 419.366225166 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8601746844 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8260869565 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.39130434783 7.06452816374 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 4.33554083885 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259685800269 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701269072684 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606976703674 0.0662205650399 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146410129019 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638691445408 0.0443174109184 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 63.6247240618 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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