a doubt in a painting
A real painting?
The lecturer is talking about some painting that are drawn by the dutch painter Rembrandt ,she believes that the doubted painting is really painted by rembart,and she gives evidences to oppose the theory of the passage ,that says that there are some doubts whether some paintings attributed to the famous painter were really painted by him .
First ,she says that it is true that painter has painted a woman with a white cap but he did not paint the fur coat .she adds that the fur coat the woman weared in the painting was painted 100 years later and that was shown by X_Ray .and this justifies the contradictory idea that is mentioned in the text
Second , the lecturer says that when the dark fur cullar was removed from the original painting ,the light shadow reflection appeared realeastic ,which cancels the passage doubt that says that the painter did a mistake so that the face appeared in shadow
Third, the lecturer says that the original painting was done on one piece of wood . She adds that what proves her idea, a similar piece of wood was used before in a different drawing of the same painter .she explains that the glued pieces, which the passage talks about and uses it as an evidence to illustrate its theory ,were added to the original painting later to enlarge it , so that the painting would be more expensive .
Here the passage introduces an idea of doubt and the lecturer provides evidences that disapprove the passage theory, and she explains each evidence in details .,
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...d she explains each evidence in details .,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, third, talking about, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76425855513 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31673387385 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 21.2450331126 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.171292626 49.2860985944 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.6 110.228320801 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 21.698381199 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06452816374 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 4.19205298013 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415814870329 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263550933845 0.0996497079465 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140200977208 0.0662205650399 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222515025461 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130464578868 0.0443174109184 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.3 13.3589403974 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.62 53.8541721854 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.0289183223 192% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.498013245 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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