the lecturer talks about the disadvantages of reducing working time
the passage talksabout the benefits of reducing work hours
Four Or Five
The reading passage talks about the regular working hours of employees in the united states and the consequences of its reduction.However, the lecturer opposes the passage , he argues that working hours reduction will not affect the company, economy, or the individual himself, instead, it will have negative results. And he listed several reasons for his assumption
The first reason, for the company , it will be more costing. He states, the new employee requires training and medical benefits, and this costs the company more because a five or four-day working employee has the same medical benefits. Moreover, the company has to buy new equipment for new employers and this will increase its consumption. This contradicts with what the passage says that there will be twenty percent saving because ethe employee worked for four hours instead of five.
Secondly, for the economy, the lecturer states that it will not reduce the unemployment Rates as mentioned in the passage. He explains, because its more costing , the company may ask its four days working employee to work for an extra day instead of hiring a new employee . or the company may add pressure on its employee to do five days' work in 4 days duration. This opposes the idea mentioned in the text, that states, companies will be error-prone.
The third reason, the lecturer says that according to the individual himself, it will not be beneficial. He explains that hour reduction will decrease the job's stability and prevent the employee from getting a promotion because a five days worker is better for management .This is opposite to the passage point of view that says it will improve the employee's live .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Four Or Five The reading passage talks about the regu...
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...owever, the lecturer opposes the passage , he argues that working hours reduction ...
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...ion The first reason, for the company , it will be more costing. He states, the...
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...e. He explains, because its more costing , the company may ask its four days worki...
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...states, companies will be error-prone. The third reason, the lecturer says that...
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...ive days worker is better for management .This is opposite to the passage point of...
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... says it will improve the employees live .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05734767025 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68126577821 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.012395656 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174743808891 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743768993862 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743232562887 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126152032109 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717771001089 0.0443174109184 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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