Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Today there is no shortage of debate that games are one of the best teachers for children. but a lot of people believes that games only distract children`s attention and prevent their development. From my point of view, it is not more that delusion, because games are able to give children a lot of vital skills for their future, and I try to explain it in the following essay.
Firstly, children learn a lot of about competition, while they are playing games. it is definitely true that every game is accompanies by contest. Moreover, adult people face on competitions every day, for example at work or even at home. so, if children spend a lot of time playing, they will facilitate their future life. according to my personal experience, I used to compete with my peers in running, but unfortunately, I have never achieved successful results in it. so, when I lost some games, I became extremely upset and depressed, but despite all those difficulties, I continued my competition. Furthermore, those children`s competitions help me to seasoned my character and make my adult life easier.
Secondly, games are able to help children to improve their team-spirit skills and make them more socialized. it is common knowledge that child is not able to play with himself, because games involve not less than two persons, so game always leads to communication. In addition, the ability to communicate with other people makes person more socialized. Also, children often play with group, which helps them to develop their team-spirit qualities. it happens because children try to lead their team to winning, so they are obliged find a compromise with each other and play as a team. according to my personal experience, I was an introvert when I was a child. but when I started to play in team games, I was compelled to communicate with other children, so in virtue of those games I became more social.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, it goes without say that games are extremely beneficial for children and their understanding of the world. And parents should allow their children to play more with their friends and peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9532967033 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91014215526 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 419.366225166 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1111617203 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8947368421 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176603450539 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623707158457 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505309305361 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102649907994 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359032186219 0.0443174109184 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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