Endotherms dinossaurs
The reading and the lecture are both about if dinossaurs were endotherms.The author of article feels that dinossaurs differ in many ways from reptiles. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that there is not enough arguments proving dinosaurs are endotherms.
According to the reading fossils from dinossaurs were found in polar areas. The article mentions that only endothermic animals that can maintain body temperature can live in cold conditions. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that in that time in the Polar regions the clime was much warmer than today. Additionally,he points out that they could migrate on winter in order to survive.
Secondly,the author suggests the position and movement of the legs on endotherms animals. In the article,it is said that the phsical activity of animals that have their legs underneath their body its a carachteristic of animals that are endothermic. The lecturer,however,asserts that legs under body doesnt mean were endotherms. He goes on to say that dinossaurs had an advantage having their legs under body allowing them to carry more weight and grow more.
Finally,the author posits that the bone structure from dinossaurs was from endotherms. The author contends that the dense bone allowed them to grow quickly. In contrast, the lecturer stance is that they also had bones called growth rings. He notes that it permited them to stop growing on cooler periods,such as not endotherms animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aurs differ in many ways from reptiles. The lecturer disputes the claims made in th...
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...at there is not enough arguments proving dinosaurs are endotherms. According ...
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...n polar areas. The article mentions that only endothermic animals that can mainta...
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...d them to stop growing on cooler periods,such as not endotherms animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02282980004 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1102142138 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220492799697 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578807092813 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690129642437 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132977475659 0.162205337803 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146297739573 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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