Hail—pieces of ice that form and fall from clouds instead of snow or rain—has always been a problem for farmers in some areas of the United States. Hail pellets can fall with great force and destroy crops in the field. Over the last few decades, a method of reducing hail, called “cloud seeding,” has been tried.
The article states that "cloud seeding" is a way used for spraying iodide on storm clouds from an airplane. This method is very beneficial and protects crops from hail's negative effects. However, the professor disagrees with this idea because of three main reasons.
First, the reading claims that the laboratory experiments show that hail usually forms in freezing water vapor, and when experimenters in the laboratory added silver iodide to cold water, they observed light snow instead of hails. However, the professor refutes this idea by saying that in this condition water vapor does not just make light snow it can have a negative impact like drought and it is damaged crops because of lack of water.
Second, the article posits that the evidence from Asia shows that point cloud seeding used as a successful method for controlling the precipitation in urban areas had a positive result in Asia; so it can have the same results in the US. In contrast, the professor says that the results shown in Asia cannot be the same as results in the US, because, in Asia, it used only in an urban areas, where the air pollution provides a suitable condition for it so it probably not work in the unpolluted fields in the US.
Finally, the passage claims that the local studies show the effectiveness of cloud seeding. However, the professor opposes this point by saying that a decrease in hail appeared is it not only happened in cloud seeding area, it also happened in other neighboring areas. So it more likely this was a result of natural variation in local weather not an effect of cloud seeding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...ause, in Asia, it used only in an urban areas, where the air pollution provides a sui...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...weather not an effect of cloud seeding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, second, so, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85818181818 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55625242225 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2211506599 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156773321938 0.272083759551 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659045828563 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406679263416 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962845319937 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373148016704 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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