Importance of water consumption
The reading is on the topic of the importance of water for our body and states certain detrimental effects if not consumed in the required quantity. The lecturer, however, casts doubt on the author's claims and finds them not well founded.
To begin, the author cites a famous quote about drinking eight glasses of water during the day and mentions that certain Americans are suffering from dehydration as they are not consuming as much water, which is lost doing enervating activities. However, the lecture debunks this point of the author, as no study proves that we require eight glasses of water or that Americans are suffering from dehydration. Second, the author affirms that overconsumption of beverages is the main source of dehydration in our body, but the lecturer casts doubt on this fact and holds a stance that this fact has not been confirmed by any of the medical studies. She goes on to say that the sugar in these beverages could lead to some problems, but dehydration cannot be caused by their consumption.Finally, the author puts forward that dehydration could lead to poor health, like weakening of muscles and weight gain and affirms that we should drink as much water as possible. The lecturer challenges this argument and states that one should observe the indications given by our body and intake water only when you feel thirsty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 783, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09865470852 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0365533019 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.237534888 49.2860985944 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.5 110.228320801 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 21.698381199 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154701634588 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813296127978 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638182060396 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130271968036 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185069612 0.0443174109184 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.0289183223 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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