According to the reading passage, it is stated that conditions on Venus are very extreme and inhospitable that keeping human presence there would not be possible and it provides the reasons to deal with the problem. However, the professor in the listening refutes the assumptions mentioned in the reading passage, and states that life on Venus can be possible by establishing a station that is floating fifty kilometers above the Venus surface.
Firstly, the reading claims that due to high atmospheric pressure at Venus, anything humans might land on this planet would be passed off. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that due to the physical fact, pressure above the surface is lower than pressure at a surface. He goes on to say according to this fact, pressure fifty kilometers above the Venus, might be equal to the pressure on Earth. Hence, it can't be a factor to obstruct human presence on Venus.
Secondly, the article posits that there is no storages of water on Venus, and it's atmosphere is mostly made up of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid, which breaks down the idea of establishing a permanent station on Venus. In contrast, the professor says that on that station established fifty kilometers above Venus' surface people can use available chemical material on the Venus' atmosphere to make water. Therefore, it will not be necessary to import water sources from Earth.
Finally, the reading says that because of high volume of thick clouds in the Venus' atmosphere, very little sunlight reaches this planet's surface that results in inability of humans to get electricity. The professor opposes this point by explaining that fifty kilometers above the Venus' surface not very thick clouds exist. As a result of this fact, light is not blocked in that level, and the station can use this reflected light and power cells; hence more electricity can be used to power the station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ual to the pressure on Earth. Hence, it cant be a factor to obstruct human presence ...
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...ual to the pressure on Earth. Hence, it cant be a factor to obstruct human presence ...
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...r to obstruct human presence on Venus. Secondly, the article posits that there ...
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... Secondly, the article posits that there is no storages of water on Venus, and its atmosphere i...
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...ry to import water sources from Earth. Finally, the reading says that because o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.990625 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57071662856 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7709244642 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214363120761 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998232314054 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945436270148 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143295763013 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757513672408 0.0443174109184 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.