The reading and the lecture are both about the how efficient teamwork can be in approaching new projects. While the author of the article argues that the best way for it is to gather a group of people into a team , The lecturer disputes the claims mentioned in the article. His position is that , projects done by a team may be more probable to fail in contrast to the projects done by an individual.
According to the article , a work done by a team can finish more quickly due to the number of individuals which possess greater resources. This article is challenged by the lecturer who gives an example of a company that decided to allocate one of its projects to a team. He claims that project didn't finish quickly cause it took the team members so long to reach a consensus. Additionally he points out that , when after six months members were asked about how well they were doing , their attitude was just opposite of what is mentioned in the reading.
Secondly , the author suggests that , individuals would have a better chance to get their opinions recognized as highly considerable in a team and members who are great in desicion-making will feel better about carrying out the work. The lecturer , however asserts that , again in the example of the company , while one or two individuals that were so influential dropped some ideas and the team decided to put them into practice , a highly creative member warn them but they ignored his directions. He goes on to say that , in consequence not only the project failed , but also there was blame on all member's faces.
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- Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world From the fossil remains we know that agnostids were primitive arthropods relatives of modern 86
- TPO 54 The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake The level of salt in the lake s water what scientists call its salinity has been increasing steadily for years because the lake s water is evaporating faster than it is being repla 85
- Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass window 80
- Advantages of Airships over other aircrafts Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories presented in the reading passage 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... reading and the lecture are both about the how efficient teamwork can be in approachin...
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...ned in the article. His position is that , projects done by a team may be more pro...
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...an individual. According to the article , a work done by a team can finish more q...
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...jects to a team. He claims that project didnt finish quickly cause it took the team m...
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...m members so long to reach a consensus. Additionally he points out that , when after six mon...
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...nsensus. Additionally he points out that , when after six months members were aske...
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...members who are great in desicion-making will feel better about carrying out the ...
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...bout carrying out the work. The lecturer , however asserts that , again in the exa...
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...ork. The lecturer , however asserts that , again in the example of the company , w...
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...e team decided to put them into practice , a highly creative member warn them but ...
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...d his directions. He goes on to say that , in consequence not only the project fai...
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... consequence not only the project failed , but also there was blame on all members...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69454545455 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63363649436 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1827557724 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 21.698381199 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300854223249 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113508095592 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589695675864 0.0662205650399 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208037931697 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849363767306 0.0443174109184 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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