migration hypothesis
The article and the lecture are both about whether dinosaur survived the winter on Alaska's North Slope by migrating. While the author of the article argues that there are some arguments which can support the migration hypothesis, the lecturer dispute the claims presented in the article. Her position is that those evidence is not solid enough to prove the migration hypothesis.
According to the reading, the edmontosaur must have migrated due to the lack of food in the cold and dark winter. This specifc argument is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that since the summer was warmer, there were enough plant developed in summer. Despite the fact that the this plant can't have survived in winter, this can have provided enough food for the edmontosaur.
Secondly, the author suggests that the unearthed edmontosaur skeletons found from the same place can prove that edmontosaurs lived in herds. And many modern-day migratory animals also live in herds , which can further support the migration hypothesis. The lecturer, however, asserts that living in herds can serve for other purposes like protecting from . Some animals such as alchor live in herds while they are not migratory.
Finally, the author puts forth the idea that the edmontosaur can move fast enough to migrate long distances. In contrast, the lecturer's stance is that
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...eloped in summer. Despite the fact that the this plant cant have survived in winter, thi...
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Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r. Despite the fact that the this plant cant have survived in winter, this can have ...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...day migratory animals also live in herds , which can further support the migration...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... for other purposes like protecting from . Some animals such as alchor live in her...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...igrate long distances. In contrast, the lecturers stance is that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1935483871 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52961442639 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2599586902 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118356251656 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458972830114 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058559711746 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816748038974 0.162205337803 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034431401547 0.0443174109184 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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