Permanent station on venus
Both the reading passage and listening discuss whether the human being can stay on venus or not. The author declares that nobody can stay there. However, the professor finds all the reading's ideas dubious and presents some evidence to reject them all. he says that it is possible to create a station like a balloon 50 kilometers above the surface of venus for this purpose.
Firstly, the reading states that since in the atmosphere of Venus, the pressure is higher than in the Earth, humans may be crushed. In contrast, the professor casts doubt on this point by saying that this problem is solvable using this station. therefore, the people will be safe from being crushed in this station because in this case, the pressure is not too much to crush the humans.
Secondly, the reading passage explains that there are no water and oxygen there, and carrying them to venus is not feasible. On the contrary. the professor dismisses this point by saying that there are other chemicals such as carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid. therefore, water and oxygen easily created from chemical processes using these materials. As a result, humans do not have to carry water and oxygen to venus.
Finally. the reading passage mentions that the low percentage of sunlight reaches the surface of Venus, so humans are not able to produce electrical power from the sun for supplying their power. Conversely, the professor in spite of proving the low-level of sun power says that the carbon dioxide clouds do not too thick not to use the power of the sun in this station. he adds that the solar cells not only can attract power directly from the sun but also can receive reflected lights of thick clouds below the station. Thus, humans can produce electricity for applied usages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, such as, as a result, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87458745875 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31493156876 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531353135314 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4219382034 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3125 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06452816374 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176634200778 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578464893765 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053212813162 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112130312304 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248784069079 0.0443174109184 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.