reading passage was about evidences for recognizing a portrait of Jane Austen - mahdieh
The passage states that a portrait depicting a teenage girl is a picture of jane austin, the famous novelist, and provides three reasons of support, but the professor refutes each of these reasons.
First, the reading claims that the family believes that the picture depicts her, however the professors doesn't believe so. he states that the relatives who claimed that the portrait depicts jane, did so 70 years after her death, and so they had never met her and their statment can not be a good proof.
Second, the article claims that, this portrait looks like the amateur sketch that jane's sister Cassandra has made, but the lecture claims that although the pictures are similar but the portrait may belong to one her relatives, as there were many of them in their large family. he strongly believes that the picture belongs to one of her nieces named Mary.
Third, the passage states that the style of the painting looks like the style of Humphrey who can be hired to make the portrait of jane. the professor also refutes this claim and states that there is no evidence to believe so and mention the stamp behind the canvas which the portrait has been drawn on. The stamp belongs to a man named William Leg who have sold the canvas, but he was not selling them in london untill austin was 27 years old, and this contradicts the idea as the portrait is of a teenage girl.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...essor refutes each of these reasons. First, the reading claims that the famil...
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...ure depicts her, however the professors doesnt believe so. he states that the relative...
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...ir statment can not be a good proof. Second, the article claims that, this po...
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Suggestion: He
...ere many of them in their large family. he strongly believes that the picture belo...
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...ngs to one of her nieces named Mary. Third, the passage states that the style...
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... be hired to make the portrait of jane. the professor also refutes this claim and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, may, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68979591837 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14493582366 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.51434878587 396% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.379850124 49.2860985944 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.625 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165124413106 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734558201276 0.0996497079465 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372986170824 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102670904668 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400989800154 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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