Spacecraft
The reading and lecture is about spacecraft who will enable the private citizen to buy their own tickets to travel in space. The author of the reading believes that spaceflight industry will benefit science and the public. The lecture challenges the statement made by the author. he thinks that it will be a drawback to science and public due to 3 main reasons.
First of the author suggested that space travel will benefit serious space exploration for making spaceflight cheaper. he further mentions that by lowering the cost of the space travel it will benefit space tourist and scientist to use private space flight for research purposes. The argument is challenged by the lecture. he says that the spacecraft is very expensive. The commercial space travel will need elaborate space traffic control to prevent a collision. Furthermore, he argues that if it is cheap they need to look at the safety too, they need to be retested again and again. As a result, both of them will reflect the space flight tickets
Secondly, the writer contends that privatization of space travel will accelerate the rate. The article notes that adding private space flight companies it will make the industry grow. The lecture, however, rebuts this by asserting that if they are working on a high salary there will be poor profits. As a result, they will end up working with commercial stuff that will lead to no scientific research.
Finally, he states that the government is sole providers of space travel. The author establishes that they will be able to raise funds through ticket sale which means that the financial burden on taxpayers will ease significantly. The lecture, on the other hand, posits that billions of dollars are spent on private space travel. he puts forth the idea that private space travel cannot raise a huge amount. The burden will not be ease. they have to pay more to subsidize on space travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ry will benefit science and the public. The lecture challenges the statement made b...
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...enges the statement made by the author. he thinks that it will be a drawback to sc...
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...oration for making spaceflight cheaper. he further mentions that by lowering the c...
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... argument is challenged by the lecture. he says that the spacecraft is very expens...
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...lars are spent on private space travel. he puts forth the idea that private space ...
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...ge amount. The burden will not be ease. they have to pay more to subsidize on space ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95975232198 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5064668251 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9346807025 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0475124756114 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026099337119 0.0996497079465 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817366565016 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0376758371669 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405021409537 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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