Sports and social activities are just important as classes and library should receive equal financial support. Agree or Disagree?
From many years we hear from our parents, teachers that other then textbook studies we should learn and obtain more knowledge from the outside world. This outside world of studies is found in our universities today like a library where we need equal financial support like other activities. Personally, I believe that the library should receive equal financial support as the other activities as today. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in my following essay
When I was a kid often there used to be a song on television. The name of the song was "Books Books books Babbalola". It was a program where kids used to choose the subject and play a game by answering a number of questions. They only source to answer the question is by obtaining knowledge from a library. So the library is a house for every individual who needs to gain and implement their thoughts in a paper. For instance, I remember when I was a kid our financial conditions were not good. I didn't have a certain amount of money to buy books. As a result, I used to sit in the library to complete my assignments. Moreover, a library is not only provided with books it is also provided with computers with good internet services. If the government doesn't grant financial support to libraries then from where a lower-middle-class student who is brilliant in studies will gain knowledge from.
In universities and colleges, sports play a very important role. Government grants financial support to these activities. The reason is, sports helps the student to work on physical activities. According to them, some pushup and running makes student healthy and avoid them from many health issues in the future. For example, if a person is sick and he comes to know about a health issue. The doctors have warned him that he should take care of his serious health issue. He suddenly realizes that he needs research on his illness. The only place for his research will be a library where he can sit and find information on homemade remedies that will help him to cure. So the moral of the story is when we are in dealing in a situation and need a solution on a particular subject we sit in the house of books.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that every library should receive equal financial support like sports and social activities. This is because financial support will help the library to get connected to this outside world of knowledge and that book.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74707259953 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72565929828 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468384074941 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7318386879 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4583333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7916666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241863503459 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720123702543 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108992910719 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174441466085 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101947141318 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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