A person should never take the decision alone. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The word decision is a very important word in our life. Some people believe that taking the decision alone is a good idea while others oppose that it's a bad idea. In my opinion, a person should never make an important decision alone because it may lead to benefit if its a minor decision or it may lead to a crisis if its a life decision.
There are lots of pros and cons when we decide on small things. First, let's talk about a small decision that is taken in everyday activity. For instance, my friend was planning for a baby shower. She was due by 15 days. She was indeed very happy about organizing it because she was feeling great that even in the pregnancy she could some her baby shower all by herself in such a condition. On the day of the baby shower, she has to go to the hospital because it was an emergency. Her baby who was supposed to be there after 15 days came before 15 days. As a result, she was happy and sad because though her decision of planning was wrong he bundle of joy came soon.
There are many decision that may lead to a loss of projects in many international companies. For example, a project leader was planning to start a new project. he spoke to senior project leader. he advised him not to start the project because there was much money it cost a lot of money and also he warned him if the project loses there will be a loss to the company. His friend ignores his word and he started his new project. New project had many new freshers. There were training and a handheld meeting was held. But unfortunately, there were many free-riders within the new project. the free riders were none other than the experienced staff who had the knowledge of the project. they didn't contribute well with the staff. When the project deadline was near and the and was executed there was a big loss. The blame came on the freshers because they didn't contribute well. He realized that the decision he made was wrong which led to a crisis in the company.
Decision taking is good but I strongly believe that if we take and listen to pieces of advice given by peers or friends or family member it will be a good decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...is a good idea while others oppose that its a bad idea. In my opinion, a person sho...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...alone because it may lead to benefit if its a minor decision or it may lead to a cr...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... decision or it may lead to a crisis if its a life decision. There are lots of p...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...rgency. Her baby who was supposed to be there after 15 days came before 15 days. As a resul...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'bundles'.
Suggestion: bundles
...h her decision of planning was wrong he bundle of joy came soon. There are many de...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decision seems to be countable; consider using: 'many decisions'.
Suggestion: many decisions
... bundle of joy came soon. There are many decision that may lead to a loss of projects in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...er was planning to start a new project. he spoke to senior project leader. he advi...
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Suggestion: He
...ect. he spoke to senior project leader. he advised him not to start the project be...
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Suggestion: The
...any free-riders within the new project. the free riders were none other than the ex...
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Suggestion: They
...f who had the knowledge of the project. they didnt contribute well with the staff. W...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... had the knowledge of the project. they didnt contribute well with the staff. When th...
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Suggestion: didn't
...blame came on the freshers because they didnt contribute well. He realized that the d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36159600998 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31377640105 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468827930175 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1207792137 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.96 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.04 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829660635064 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237779226075 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037543124663 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072812692798 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560107333604 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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