spacecraft
The reading and lecture is about Spacecraft who will enable private citizen to by their own tickets to travel in Space. The author of the reading believes that spaceflight industry will benefit science and the public. The lecture challenges the statement made by the author. He is of the opinion that it will be a drawback to science and public due to 3 main reasons.
First of the author suggested that space travel will benefit serious space exploration for making spaceflight cheaper. He further mentions that by lowering the cost of the space travel it will benefit space tourist and scientist to use private space flight for research purposes. The argument is challenged by the lecture. He says that, the spacecraft are very expensive. The commercial space travel will need elaborate space traffic control to prevent collision. Furthermore, he argues that if it is cheap they need to look at the safety too, they need to be retested again and again. As a result both of them will reflect the space flight tickets.
Secondly, the writer contends that privatization of space travel will accelerate the rate. The article notes that by adding private space flight companies it will make the industry grow. The lecture, however, rebuts this by asserting that if they are working on a high salary there will be poor profits. As a result, they will end up working with commercial stuff that will lead to no scientific research.
Finally he states that government are sole providers of space travel. The author establishes that they will be able to raise funds through ticket sale which means that financial burden on taxpayers will ease significantly. The lecture on the other hand, posit that billions of dollars are spent on private space travel. He puts forth the idea that private space travel cannot raise huge amount. The burden will not be an ease. They have to pay more to subsidise on space travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry will benefit science and the public. The lecture challenges the statement made b...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey need to be retested again and again. As a result both of them will reflect the ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...will lead to no scientific research. Finally he states that government are sole prov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 5.04856512141 376% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92879256966 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49656570945 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517027863777 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7292810343 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8095238095 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0475921255406 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236580624442 0.0996497079465 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748549125696 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378605145673 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408116620908 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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