Summarize
The article introduces the topic of using technology in coming smart cars.The writer says that coming up with smart cars will be safer , quicker and have reduced costs. The lecturer disagrees with it and he says and attacks claims made in the reading.
First ,the author says that using sensors in smart cars will save accidents on the highway , as these sensors will detect cars and other obstacles in their path.On the other hand , speakers believes that there is always some occasionally fault , as more cars will be in the road because of new technology ,it will be tightly packed and increased the chances of accidents.
According to writers, using smart cars will practically make traffic problems disappear as these computer based car will have high speed and have less commutation on the road , but professor refuses this argument by saying that having smart cars in the market , they will more people who will drive and traffic of cars will increase which leads to long commute drives.
Also , the reading passage notes how there will reduction in cost of driving also , because of using direct routes , car owners will have to spend less money on repairs and replacement parts .The professor in the listening passage is doubtful that this is not accurate , he says that the cost of parts like sensors and other advanced part will cost more money than regular replacements and repairs for regular cards .
As you can see , the author and lecturer hold very different views on smart cars useage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...f using technology in coming smart cars.The writer says that coming up with smart c...
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Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... coming up with smart cars will be safer , quicker and have reduced costs. The le...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...afer , quicker and have reduced costs. The lecturer disagrees with it and he says ...
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Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...tacks claims made in the reading. First ,the author says that using sensors in sm...
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... cars will save accidents on the highway , as these sensors will detect cars and o...
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... cars and other obstacles in their path.On the other hand , speakers believes that...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...bstacles in their path.On the other hand , speakers believes that there is always ...
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... there is always some occasionally fault , as more cars will be in the road becaus...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...be in the road because of new technology ,it will be tightly packed and increased ...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this computer' or 'these computers'?
Suggestion: this computer; these computers
...ally make traffic problems disappear as these computer based car will have high speed and have...
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...ed and have less commutation on the road , but professor refuses this argument by ...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ing that having smart cars in the market , they will more people who will drive an...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hich leads to long commute drives. Also , the reading passage notes how there wil...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e will reduction in cost of driving also , because of using direct routes , car ow...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ng also , because of using direct routes , car owners will have to spend less mone...
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...s money on repairs and replacement parts .The professor in the listening passage i...
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...money on repairs and replacement parts .The professor in the listening passage is d...
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...ge is doubtful that this is not accurate , he says that the cost of parts like sen...
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...placements and repairs for regular cards . As you can see , the author and lectur...
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...airs for regular cards . As you can see , the author and lecturer hold very diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33224643692 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 21.2450331126 198% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.0238075 49.2860985944 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.166666667 110.228320801 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1666666667 21.698381199 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.3589403974 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.0289183223 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.498013245 179% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.2008830022 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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