Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage.
The article introduces the topic of why it is a much harder task to send humans to Mars than the Moon, and the three reasons behind it. The lecturer in the listening passage disagrees. She believes that with the right strategy, sending humans to Mars is doable.
In the reading passage, it is stated that the cargo capacity of a spaceship is too limited to support a mission to Mars, and that it would be impossible to successfully send a spaceship to Mars due to this issue. The lecturer, however, disagrees with this, and suggests a solution. The solution is "hydroponics", which means planting plants in water instead of soil. According to the lecturer, this idea not only solves the food and oxygen issue, but also allows the crew to recycle water.
The author mentions a second obstacle, and claims that a mission this long would be physically impossible for the astronauts due to the zero gravity environment that they have to live in. According to the reading passage, the effects of staying in such an environment would have severe effects on the humans. The speaker thinks otherwise, and says that many astronauts have managed to live in space stations with zero gravity for many months. She believes that with the right strategies applied by the crew, such as regular exercising and taking necessary minerals, it actually is possible for humans to survive such a long mission.
Another reason the author brings is that the Sun releases radiation, and in space it Earth's magnetic field wouldn't be able to protect the astronauts. The lecturer comes up with a solution for this problem, and suggests the use of a partial shield, along with a monitor that monitors the sun's radiation release.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
..., and in space it Earths magnetic field wouldnt be able to protect the astronauts. The ...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suns'' or 'sun's'?
Suggestion: suns'; sun's
... along with a monitor that monitors the suns radiation release.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, second, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92413793103 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7742745514 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.51434878587 528% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7914602062 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06452816374 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0685414152949 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028397099942 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427419042677 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401444655109 0.162205337803 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00519363406873 0.0443174109184 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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