Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge specific points made in the reading passage.
The reading passage and the lecturer discus whether starting a franchise business is profitable. The author states that it has many advantages in saving money and security. The lecturer disagrees with each point made in the lecturer and suggests that independent companies are far better in the aspects mentioned above.
In the passage it is argues that finding reliable suppliers of the goods for the beginner businessmen is a problem but franchises under big companies already have suppliers and they can not be scammed this way. The lecturer undermines this fact by mentioning the price of the brands’ suppliers which is higher than the one on the market.
The author claims that franchises are able to save money on advertising as big companies provide them a name. Nevertheless, the professor disproves this theory and says that franchise owner must pay up to 6 per cent in order to be promoted. It is worth mentioning that big companies advertise only their product and leave the franchise less chance of becoming successful than if they were independent.
Finally, the article discuss the reliable security of franchises and its prospects and lower chances to fail because of the proven business model. In the lecture, the speaker contends that such a plan might not be risky but people who buys companies from previous owner have more success.
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- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today 71
- TPO 11 Integrated Writing TaskA recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature novels plays and poems than they used to This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public for 80
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they challenge specific points made in the reading passage 90
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words Do not 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dvantages in saving money and security. The lecturer disagrees with each point made...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12107623318 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69382465403 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605381165919 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2007102201 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14553029886 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539055344745 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654115387291 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879023450453 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810496040478 0.0443174109184 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.