Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific methods proposed in the reading passage.
The reading passage and the lecture are both about humpback whales may be use navigation stars to migrate long distance. Whereas the author of the reading states three evidences to support that whales using navigation stars for migrate. The lecturer cast doubt on the main points in the reading by provide three reasons.
First of all, according to the reading whales are smart animals so that level of intelligence helps whales to navigate the stars. However, the lecturer disputes this point . He says that their are animals they have average intelligent level even though these animals use star navigation to migrate such as birds. Furthermore, He claims that their is no connection between intelligent level of animal and using stars to navigation.
Secondly, the reading states that humpback whales have an external force help them to migrate in straight line, tis force is use stars for navigation. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. He argues that humpback whales depend on earth magnetic fields of the earth since they have a compounds in their brains can sense the magnetic field of the earth.
Finally, the reading claims that humpback whales depend on spy-hopping to see stars. On the other hand the lecture believes that their are animals such as sharks using spy-hopping even they do not migrate. Moreover, He adds that whales sometimes do spy-hopping during a day when there are no available stars in the sky or to hunt food from the sea surface
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...urer disputes this point . He says that their are animals they have average intellige...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...h as birds. Furthermore, He claims that their is no connection between intelligent le...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a compound' or simply 'compounds'?
Suggestion: a compound; compounds
...tic fields of the earth since they have a compounds in their brains can sense the magnetic ...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...he other hand the lecture believes that their are animals such as sharks using spy-ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05327868852 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51686853821 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520491803279 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9425906479 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8461538462 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136366537037 0.272083759551 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669522771576 0.0996497079465 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725849223635 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929037795611 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067958115976 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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