Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
Now get ready to answer the question. You may use your notes to help you answer.
Unlike the passage, which claims that there are evidence that prove that dinosaurs were endotherms. However, the professor disagrees with these evidence and provides three reasons of support.
First of all, the passage states that one of the reasons for believing that dinosaurs were endotherms is that dinosaurs fossils have been discovered in polar regions and only animals can maintain temperature in such cold weather. However, the professor refutes this point by stating that polar regions were much warmer than today and even though when weather become colder, polar dinosaurs could have hibernated or migrated to a warmer place like many reptiles so they can survive.
second of all, the article claims that there is connection between endothermy and the position and movement of the legs.The legs of dinosaurs were underneath the body as all of modern endotherms. However, the professor opposes this point by stating that the underneath position of the legs is to support more weight so they can grow larger and being large is advantage for dinosaurs.
lastly, the reading avers that there is connection between endothermy and bone structue. Fossilized bones of dinosaurs include structure called Haversian canals which allow them to grow quickly. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that dinosaurs had growth rings, which is the thickening of the bones that indicates and proves that they were not rapidly growing. Growing rings happened when they grew rapid then slow then rapid again, which is not characteristic of endothermy as endothermal animals grow rapidly even if environment is so cold.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Second
...many reptiles so they can survive. second of all, the article claims that there i...
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Suggestion: The
...d the position and movement of the legs.The legs of dinosaurs were underneath the b...
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Suggestion: Lastly
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33203125 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56466360165 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9652525668 49.2860985944 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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