Should the government invest money to improve Internet access or public transportation?
Governments try hard to keep their nation at high standard of living. if my country would like to spend more money on improving the internet, I would adamantly disagree with this idea as money should be invested in public transportation instead. I believe this way for many reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, we live in a world full of technology and already well internet accessed. As a citizen, I do not need more improvement at this criteria. On the other hand, public transportation needs a lot of renovations to help people to live their life more convenient with less pressure. My own country is a compelling example of this. Egypt is my home town, in the last couple of years, our president refused to renovate the subways which in contrary he should have considered it in his plane to make our country better. However, by this bad and wrong decision that he has taken. A devastating tragedy recently occurred, a train has been crashed in the subway because of its old equipments and bad management. if the president had taken the right call for improving the subways, we have never experienced this horrible event that left hundreds of killed and injured people.
Second of all, if public transportation will improve, this will lead to less pollution and lighter traffic.
By renovations, it will convince more people to use these kinds of transportation such as subways and buses. Cutting down the number of usage of personal cars will ease our daily lives. Imagine ten employees need to go to work every day, instead of moving ten cars, they would use the subway train. Our environment will be healthier and people will be happier and with better health. Furthermore, it will affect our economy as people will save money of the gas and repairing their own cars. The saved money, we can spend at the most one third of it on the public transportation. For example, nowadays I am using the bus to go to my university. I used to take my car at the beginning but, I always find a difficulty parking my car and I was spending a lot of money on gas and oil change. By switching to the bus, I saved a lot of my income and I am able to enjoy my ride to my classes now.
In conclusion, public transportation is more important aspect in our life nowadays. The Internet has been already improved while the other did not. For me, these renovations improve citizen’s quality of life and make them productive in a less polluted and relaxed environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68109339408 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78037609475 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533029612756 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6152857522 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2916666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216237951153 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565091824109 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786627496808 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142573000473 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829604552302 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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