TPO 09- Car manufacturers and governments have been eagerly seeking a replacement for the automobile's main source of power, the internal-combustion engine. By far the most promising alternative source of energy for cars is the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine, which uses hydrogen to create electricity that, in turn, powers the car. Fuel-cell engines have several advantages over internal-combustion engines and will probably soon replace them.
The reading and writing both discuss about the efficiency of hydrogen based engines over the combustion engines.The passage highlights the three main advantages of using fuel cell as an energy source.This is challenged by the speaker for the following reasons.
Firstly, the author claims that unlike the hydrogen based engine which uses renewable source for its production the combustion engines use non renewable sources, diesel for its ignition. The lecturer however states that the hydrogen is not easily available since it needs to be obtained in a highly pure state that requires exquisite technology for its production. Likewise, it needs to be stored under very cold conditions of negative temperatures which is difficult to maintain.
Secondly, hydrogen fuel was claimed to have no pollution troubles in contast to the oil run machines burn carbon dioxide and harm the air. This is also rebutted by the lecturer. He explains that hydrogen is produced by the process of purification which needs burning coal or oil which generates byproducts that are deterrent to air.
Thirdly, the statement hydrogen fuel being economical when compared to combustion engines in the passage is argued by the speaker. He posits that its not cheaper to make hydrogen since it need a very rare and expensive metal which is platinum. Even Though efforts are being made to replace platinum with a more affordable material none has been succesfull. In these way the lecturer casts doubt on the suggestions made by the author of the passage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rent to air. Thirdly, the statement hydrogen fuel being economical when comp...
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... and expensive metal which is platinum. Even Though efforts are being made to replace plati...
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...e material none has been succesfull. In these way the lecturer casts doubt on the sugges...
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...l none has been succesfull. In these way the lecturer casts doubt on the suggesti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27935222672 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72405560621 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7807048132 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.545454545 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340525641163 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10686117242 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972056036282 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194152347019 0.162205337803 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543398339216 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.42419426049 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.