TPO 1
The readimg and the lecture dive information about a new proposal that gives the option to work four days insted five days in the week for a less pay. While the reading illustrates three benefits of four days work compare to five days, the lecture refutes all the points discussed in the reading passage.
First, the lecture indicates that the suggestion is impractical and absurd. Since the companies will sped more money on traning and medical benefits, giving the option for worker to work four days insted of five will lower companies profits and increase their spending. Yet, companies will also required to spend additional money on office space and computer purchase. Thus, in contrust with the reding, this will add more burden on companies budjet and dramatecly decreas their profits.
Second, contrary to what belief in the reading passage that the new proposal will help the whole country by lowering the unemployment and help the companies , in part, by eleminate errors, the lecture argues that the companies might not invest in new employees to lower their expenses. Instead, companies might rais their expectation to their current emplotyess bt asking them to work over time. As a result, the unemplymnet rate will remain the same, and the workers are porns to make more errors.
Fianlly, the author mentions that the proposal will impove employees live. The lecture disagrees with the statement by saying that the proposal pose risk on the employess. He explains that the propsal significantly decrease job stability as the four days employees are the first to loose their jobs in any econmy crisis. Yet, they are less likely to get mangment position as companies prefer those who are work five days to provide a consistant supervision and management.
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companies will also required to
companies will also be required to
contrary to what belief in the reading passage
contrary to the belief in the reading passage
are the first to loose their jobs
are the first to lose their jobs
Sentence: The readimg and the lecture dive information about a new proposal that gives the option to work four days insted five days in the week for a less pay.
Error: insted Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: readimg Suggestion: reading
Sentence: Since the companies will sped more money on traning and medical benefits, giving the option for worker to work four days insted of five will lower companies profits and increase their spending.
Error: traning Suggestion: trading
Error: insted Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Thus, in contrust with the reding, this will add more burden on companies budjet and dramatecly decreas their profits.
Error: decreas Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dramatecly Suggestion: dramatic
Error: budjet Suggestion: budget
Error: contrust Suggestion: contrast
Error: reding Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Second, contrary to what belief in the reading passage that the new proposal will help the whole country by lowering the unemployment and help the companies , in part, by eleminate errors, the lecture argues that the companies might not invest in new employees to lower their expenses.
Error: eleminate Suggestion: eliminate
Sentence: Instead, companies might rais their expectation to their current emplotyess bt asking them to work over time.
Error: rais Suggestion: raise
Error: emplotyess Suggestion: employers
Error: bt Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As a result, the unemplymnet rate will remain the same, and the workers are porns to make more errors.
Error: unemplymnet Suggestion: unemployment
Sentence: Fianlly, the author mentions that the proposal will impove employees live.
Error: impove Suggestion: improve
Sentence: The lecture disagrees with the statement by saying that the proposal pose risk on the employess.
Error: employess Suggestion: employers
Sentence: He explains that the propsal significantly decrease job stability as the four days employees are the first to loose their jobs in any econmy crisis.
Error: propsal Suggestion: proposal
Error: econmy Suggestion: economy
Sentence: Yet, they are less likely to get mangment position as companies prefer those who are work five days to provide a consistant supervision and management.
Error: consistant Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: mangment Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 291 250
No. of Characters: 1445 1200
No. of Different Words: 154 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.966 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.451 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.483 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.582 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.112 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4