TPO 23
The reading passage is about three hypotheses of the declining population of yellow cedar that is a species of tree in northwestern North America. However, the lecturer rejects these hypotheses and says that these hypotheses are not convening.
Firstly, the reading passage claims that insect parasites especially beetle larvae can be one of the causes that the yellow cedar decline because the beetle larvae eat the wood but the lecturer states that healthy yellow cedars are resistant against insect parasites because they saturated by kind of poison. Thus insects can damage only sick trees.
Secondly, the reading passage says that brown bears maybe damage the yellow cedar tree. The yellow cedar has a high sugar content and brown bears claw the cedars in order to eat the tree bark. While the lecturer rebuts this hypothesis and explains that threes are no bears in some areas like midland but the population of yellow cedar are still declining.
Finally, the reading passage says that because of changes of climate the roots of the yellow cedar are sensitive and they grow in late winter rather than in the early spring. So the cold nights of winter damage them. However, the lecturer says that in high elevation that the weather is colder than other place, population of the yellow cedar have not declined and there are more the yellow cedar trees there. Thus the climate changes is not blame.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...cause they saturated by kind of poison. Thus insects can damage only sick trees. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 411, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... are more the yellow cedar trees there. Thus the climate changes is not blame.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01276595745 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22029814596 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.898323219 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.090909091 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440673497704 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174742646303 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984443158936 0.0662205650399 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268221449805 0.162205337803 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713682121855 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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