The best thing in life do not cost money
There is a famous saying that says: "it is impossible to buy happiness by money". While there are some people who believe that nowadays the best things in the world can be bought with money. In my opinion, the above statement is true because many important issues can be solved by spending money. Some of reason are listed below.
First of all, I can mention gaining better education that is one of the best things in the world because life's of whole people in the world depends on higher and more developed knowledge in every scientific and artistic field. Nowadays, most of the best schools, colleges, and universities need to pay a high tuition fee to enter them since best teachers, professors and facilities like equipped library, sport centers, labs and so on have collected in one place. These facilities are not available to everyone from everywhere especially for talented students from the Third World countries. They have to spend a lot of money to benefit these facilities.
Moreover, having money you can have a healthier life that is one of the best things for everyone. For example, a poor family or poor people have to eat unhealthy food because organic and healthy food like fresh fruit, vegetable, and meat are expensive. Bad diet leads to different diseases like heart attack, malnutrition, kinds of cancer and other dangerous diseases. While having a healthy diet you can keep your health that is the greatest blessing of God.
In addition, kindness also is another best thing. However, most people think that to be kind does not need to cost money and have a kind heart is enough to enjoy small happiness. In the world, there are many social problems that have a strong impact on people life. To encounter with them, we must have money and plan. For instance, famine in poor countries like Africa causes to death many children, women, and men annually or prevalence of drug addiction among young people and youth is another big challenge in most countries. To face such social issues we need to spend a lot of money so that by solving these problems, the world become a better place to live.
In conclusion, money is the key to solve some important issues that have effects on whole people of the world like obtaining a better education, having a healthy life, and share kindness. All these help us to live together in peace and tranquility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssible to buy happiness by money'. While there are some people who believe that ...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of cancer and other dangerous diseases. While having a healthy diet you can keep your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81662591687 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49367658152 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528117359413 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7966045715 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238985744267 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756692425188 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775759210692 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138530259232 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361822611643 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.