The reading passage and the lecture both discuss about the history of the man who was the first one to conquer the North Pole. However, the lecturer doubts the truth of the story.
Firstly, although the committee declared that Peary reached the North Pole by investigating Peary's equipment the woman disagrees with the statement. She argues that Peary was fund by his close friend who worked in the committee which made the investigation bias. In addition, the lecturer wonders if the committee had a complete and careful investigation within only two days.
Second, the writer offers the evidence that Avery made the same task in less than 30 days to support that Peary could make it, too. The lecturer refutes that it is not fair to compare between Avery and Peary. She feels this way because Avery's food was supplied by an airplane rather than a dogsled. And the weather was more favorable for Avery, while it was not the same condition as Peary.
Last but not the least, for the lecturer, measuring the shadows in Peary's picture is not conveiencing. The lecturer refutes that the photograph taken by a original camera is too old to be identified. The photograph is fussy and fading overtime. As a result, using the picture with low quality to calculate the place where Peary reached is not wise and inaccurate.
For these three reasons, the lecturer does not believe that Peary was the first one to reach the North Pole.
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 60
- Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 50 integrated 3
- It s difficult for teachers to be both popular well liked and effective in helping students learn Agree or disagree 88
- TPO 45 integrated
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80894308943 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45338927011 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9048126929 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373006407603 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11521623439 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928258463578 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202375885503 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700920790907 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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