TPO 32
Both the reading passage and the lecture discuss the weird sound that heard by Russian submarines patrolling in the North Atlantic. With this in mind, the author states that there are several ideas about the probability caused of the odd sounds. The professor, on the other hand, refutes all three episodes of arguments mentioned in the passage, believing there are certain problems with those theories.
First, the writer points out that the sound could be caused by male and female orca whales during some ritual. this is because these animals live where the submarines recorded the voice. However, the professor makes it clear that it orca live near the surface, while submarines move in deepth so, it is impossible to hear orca sound far away in the deepth of ocean.
Second, the reading material argues that the strange sounde might be caused by giant squids which are marine inverteberates liveing deep in the ocean. they have soft bodies and due to this the sonar is unable to detect them. Conversely, the lecturer explains that this theory is the better candidate but still it is debated. She continues that the odd noise disappeard for some years even when the squids were living in the place. Thus, it is impossible that squids stop noising for a period of time and after that again make noise.
Finally, the reading selection disscus the idea of some military technology like another country's submarines because it may that they didn't register on sonar and using some thechniques that help them to be undetectable by sonar. In contrast, the lecturer argues that submarines move around quikely and also make enginee noise which have not been reported. Moreover, it is still impossible to make submarine that can move in silence without any enginee noise. Thuse, this idea is not reasonable in a sense.
time = 5 mine extra time => 25min
Words = 305
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... female orca whales during some ritual. this is because these animals live where the...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...verteberates liveing deep in the ocean. they have soft bodies and due to this the so...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...possible that squids stop noising for a period of time and after that again make noise. Final...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rys submarines because it may that they didnt register on sonar and using some thechn...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s idea is not reasonable in a sense. time = 5 mine extra time => 25min Wor...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Time
...a is not reasonable in a sense. time = 5 mine extra time => 25min Words =...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, may, moreover, second, so, still, thus, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97444089457 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39175825092 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7354826694 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06452816374 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421867470747 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112450177084 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708817494502 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184280543868 0.162205337803 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101959525639 0.0443174109184 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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