tpo 40) living in Venus
THE READING ASSERTS THAT human being will need to live on onother planets like Mars, Moon. However living in Venus is impossible due TO ITS EXTREME CONDITIOn becuase of some serious reasons. However, the lecturer challenges the statements made fy reading, and refutes them all. She explians some practical solutions for them.
First, the reading argues that atmospheric pressure at Venus is 90 times greater than the pressure at Earth.On the other hand, the lecturer says that the pressure of fifty kilometers above the surface of the Earth is so much lower than the pressure of Venus's surface. in other word, It is exactly like the Earth's pressure.
Furethermore, the reading holds the view that there are sign of water on venus sureface and the Venus atmosphere is made up of mostly carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid.While the lecturer holds the view that there are some chemical processes by which water could be obtained from carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid.
Finally the reading states that because of thick clouds around the Venus, just about 40 percent of sunlight can reach the planet surface. in contrast, the lecturer brings up the idea that solar power can be centered and come to the surface of Venus directly .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
...imes greater than the pressure at Earth.On the other hand, the lecturer says that ...
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Suggestion: In
...er than the pressure of Venuss surface. in other word, It is exactly like the Eart...
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Suggestion:
...he reading holds the view that there are sign of water on venus sureface and the ...
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Suggestion: While
...on dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid.While the lecturer holds the view that there ...
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Suggestion: Finally,
...om carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid. Finally the reading states that because of thi...
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Suggestion:
...acid. Finally the reading states that because of thick clouds around the Venus...
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Suggestion: In
... sunlight can reach the planet surface. in contrast, the lecturer brings up the id...
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Suggestion: .
...nd come to the surface of Venus directly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 206.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03398058252 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37490595615 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.0548529687 49.2860985944 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360080265015 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117476700413 0.0996497079465 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851769413852 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199145658226 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595222889568 0.0443174109184 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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