TPO 40 Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.
The reading and lecture are both about human surviving living on Venus. The author of the reading believes that it impossible that human can sustain life on the Venus. However, the lecturer casts doubts about the claims made in the article and refutes all the theories presented in the reading passage.
First of all, the author points out that atmospheric pressure on Venus is greater than here on earth. The article notes that space craft that landed on Venus were crushed due to it cannot sustain the pressure. Conversely, the point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that scientist can land on Venus by establishing floating station where balloon will be used to float 50 kms above Venus surface. Furthermore, he argues that the atmospheric pressure on Venus is of equal to quantity from earth.
Secondly, the author contends that Venus has no available water in their environment. The article establishes that living on Venus is improbable because there are no source of water and oxygen. On the contrary, the lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that chemical processes to make portable water out of the compound available on the planet Venus can easily be obtained in the atmosphere. Moreover, he elaborates on this by mentioning that there will be abundance in supply of water on Venus and does not need to export materials from earth in order to live on Venus.
Finally, the author states that little sunlight reaches the surface of Venus. The article denotes that the light that hits the planet just reflected back to the clouds, thus, lack of sunlight prevent humans to power their soar power cells and cannot make electricity out of it. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that the clouds on Venus are not thick and it can receive ample amount of sunlight. He puts forth the idea that the station of Venus can reflect light into the solar power and can generate electricity above and below its reflective capabilities. Hence, can accumulate large supply of electricity that can power the Station for human consumption.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
...enus is improbable because there are no source of water and oxygen. On the contrary, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 345.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95362318841 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51818173202 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498550724638 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0044750583 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395010496694 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126945474815 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569944094674 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229685407572 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602198164211 0.0443174109184 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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