TPO-42
There has been a modern trend to employ glass in buildings by architectures. The major problem with this preference is that it can be very threatening to bird as they are unable to detect the glass and mistake it for open air. The passage present three solutions for this dilemma, all of which are countervailed by the professor during the lecture.
The first solution proposed in the passage is one-way glass; a special type of glass which is only transparent on one side. This glass will appear as a mirror from the outside. It is suggested in the text that birds will comprehend this glass as an impediment. But the professor clearly opposes, declaring that the birds will not be able to distinguish between the reflection they see and open air. Thus, one-way glass will be just as harmful for birds.
Secondly, the passage imposes that by drawing colorful lines on the glass, birds might be able to detect the glass and fly around the building. This solution is also objected in the lecture. The professor states that the openings between the painted drawings will appear as holes to birds, who will try to fly through them. Unless the paintings are drawn very close together, which will diminish the purpose of utilizing glass in the building in the first place.
The final solution is the creation of a small artificial magnetic field by powerful electromagnets stabilized on the building to divert the birds away. The professor also dismisses this solution by stating that birds only use their ability to sense Earth's magnetic field when traveling long distances. For short distances, their sight and detection of light is utilized, thus simulated magnetic signals will not be of use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...by the professor during the lecture. The first solution proposed in the passage ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92682926829 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5737928566 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522648083624 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0959117244 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2666666667 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50934333407 0.272083759551 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173114468719 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708233339502 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306179549298 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684921421042 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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