TPO 44
In 1957 a European silver coin was founded in the state of Maine in united state. The main topic of both the passage and the lecture is about whether this coin had been brought to North America by European explorers like Norse or not. In this respect, by giving three reasons, the author claims that this coin is just a historical fake. The lecturer, however, rebuts all three mentioned reasons in the text believing that the coin is genuine historical evidence and had been brought by Norse to America.
First of all, the author holds the view that as the Norse's settlement in America is far from the site which the coin has been found it is unlikely that there be a connection between the coin and Norse. The lecturer, however, refutes this notion by explaining that lots of other objects which come from far away are founded in that site and it has a convincing historical reason. Native American travel great distances within North America and they were interested in obtaining objects from far away places.
Secondly, The author avers that as no silver coins have been found at the Norse's settlement, they did not bring any coins to North America. The speaker, however, rebuts this assertion by mentioning to the fact that the Norse did not have a permanent settlement in North America and returned to Europe. Hence they packed up everything including silver coins and took them back to Europe.
Finally, the author believes that Norse explorer knew that their silver coins are useless for the native of North America hence they did not bring that coins to America. The speaker, conversely, contradicts with this notion, explaining that Norse knew that their silver coins are appealing for native American and they could use the coins to make jewelry. In fact, Norse used the coins as a mean for trading with Native American.
- TPO 38: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 47- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 15: integrated writing task 73
- TPO 44 73
- TPO 42: Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...n North America and returned to Europe. Hence they packed up everything including sil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, hence, however, second, secondly, so, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83174603175 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31749510737 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463492063492 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0806682245 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622043641729 0.272083759551 229% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.249758117482 0.0996497079465 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101408816563 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389651321495 0.162205337803 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226585686719 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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