TPO 48 In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems in which frogs live; for example, frogs help play a role in protecting humans by eating disease-carrying insects. Several methods have been proposed to solve the problem of declining frog populations.
The article states that three theories which evidence the complete collapse of the eastern island. however, the professor in the listening passage cast doubts on these theories and explains that there is still no evidence that shows the actual reason for collapse and attacks each of the claims made by the theories.
First of all, in the reading, the writer begins by stating a theory which claims that deforestation, which, in turn, caused serious erosion, is the main cause of eastern island's collapse. The lecturer, however, disagrees with this point and he says about evidence shows that the cut palm trees were replaced by grassland. So, the absence of trees should not be the reason for the erosion.
Secondly, the passage posits that when native people cut and burned trees, the rats prevented regrowth by eating the fresh shoots before they could grow into large plants. With little food and no wood canoes to escape, the people perished. The professor opposes this point by saying that these rats were used as a food source as people found rat bones with chicken sources.
To sum up, both the professor and the writer hold conflicting views. they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.
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- competition 3
- Integrated. tpo 26 3
- hi 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO 48 In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems in which frogs live; for e 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...omplete collapse of the eastern island. however, the professor in the listening passage...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... and the writer hold conflicting views. they will have trouble finding common ground...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, still, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 204.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23156616376 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.287107125 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06452816374 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659760651922 0.272083759551 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249862896961 0.0996497079465 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0142081946174 0.0662205650399 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368034668946 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110719019427 0.0443174109184 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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