tpo 49
The reading and the lecture are both about the navigation system in humpback whales. The author claims that these whales use the stars to find their ways during migration like human sailors by providing three possible issues. On the other hand, the lecture casts doubt on the ideas one by one and he believes that the assertion of using stars by this kind of whales is fascinating, however, the pieces of evidence are not convincing.
First of all, the author contends that humpback whales are intelligent animals that it is possible for them to use stars as a navigation route. In contrast, the lecturer posits this assertion and he says that there is no dependable relation between being intelligent and using stars for navigation. In this regards, there are other animals which they have moderate intelligence but they use stars to find their way such as ducks. So, the use of stars has no connection to being intelligent and it seems to be an instinct ability.
Secondly, the author points out that these whales migrate in the straight lines that can depict the whales are under the influence of an external force. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes this claims and he suggests that although the whales move in the straight lines, the outer force which affects them is the Earth magnetic field. Furthermore, studies show that whales have an ability to sense the magnetic field and there is a part inside them by the name of the bio-magnetic field that can sense the Earth magnetic field.
Finally, the author states that the weird movements of Humpback whales by the name of spy-hopping which is rare in other species is an indicator of seeing stars by whales. However, the lecture rejects this assertion and he suggests that these movements have been seen in the sharks too which they never migrate and use this moves for hunting. Besides, the whales sometimes do the spy-hopping in the days that there are no stars.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gent and using stars for navigation. In this regards, there are other animals which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83081570997 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44555542202 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453172205438 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7233780889 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06452816374 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399555184457 0.272083759551 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152443220751 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552033050388 0.0662205650399 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249296154491 0.162205337803 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541174246302 0.0443174109184 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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