TPO 54
A salty inland lake located in California, the level of salt in the Salton Sea has been increasing in recent decades. As a result, it would be dangerous for fish and bird populations, as the passage puts it. It provides three suggestions to solve this problem. The lecturer, on the other hand, asserts that these suggestions are not realistic and practical and repudiates all the author's explanations by three concrete pieces of evidence.
First, the reading goes on to mention that desalination facilities could extract the salt from the lake's water, and salt-free water would be returned to the lake. Moreover, the professor rejects the author's view and illustrates the idea that whether solid materials would be left after water evaporation could cause some serious health problems. She points out that such materials may include some toxic materials as well as salt. If the wind blows away the toxic material into the air, it would cause significant problems for local people.
Second, that introducing Pacific Ocean's water being 20 percent less salty than water in the lake can decrease the salinity of the lake's water, based on what the passage claims, is refuted by the professor. She explains that although dilution of lake's water may be an efficient solution, it would cost a lot since the distance between the Pacific Ocean and the lake is 100 kilometres, so building canals or pipelines for such a long distance may be out of the budget of the government.
Third, the passage states that thanks to constructing walls in order to divide the lake into different parts, the salinity of main part of the lake would be declined, whereas the professor casts serious doubt on this point of view by saying that there are lots of geological events which are occurred in the lake such as earthquake. If an earthquake happens, the wall would be destroyed, hence high salinity water would back to low salinity water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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A salty inland lake located in Californi...
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... by three concrete pieces of evidence. First, the reading goes on to mention th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...significant problems for local people. Second, that introducing Pacific Oceans ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e out of the budget of the government. Third, the passage states that thanks to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, well, whereas, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 5.04856512141 277% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 323.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58662014279 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2290543649 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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